A Lot of things are going on in my mind....
my heart is singings its own tune....
the mind says stay away...
the heart cant give up so soon...
the mind is afraid of being hurt...
the heart is not....
the mind doesnt trust him...
the heart wants to give it a shot...
the mind tries to apply logic....
the heart is far away from it....
the mind is wary...
the heart goes by its own instinct...
the mind gives up....
it let goes of the heart...
what it doesnt know....
the heart was not with it....
right from the start...
the heart is all alone now..
waiting for his love...
what it doesnt know...
is that..waiting is tough...
expectations hurt...
they hurt a lot...
does it mean...
never to expect....and stick to the dot...
the heart starts thinking....
yes it does...
it starts feeling....
experiences the pain of loss...
but what did it lose??
did he belong to the heart all along...
or was it an illusion...
does love exist or is it a bunch of rules.???
The heart is confused.....
it wants the answers....
of what ...
its not sure...............
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well.. poem me to tune apni poori chooti se lambi love story likh di.. nicely written...
About expectations... hmmm never expect... its hard and impractical though.. like I'll expect that u gimme a great gift the first time I meet u.. :p... kidding.. ;)
about the poem... I dont knw if its intentional.. but avoid using too many the's and a's in poem... restricts the flow.. I suggest u to yourself give it a read without the's.....
hey sid!
another gud one..says it all very nicely..but plz either search for the answers asap or let go!! (u knw what i mean..rt sis?!!)
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tc
hmm.. its Real nice.. very Well written Chek out my Blog too tc :-)
well all i can say is that i loved it!!it does a tremendously good job of conveying the quandary of a person who wants to love but is conscious of the pain it can entail....organises the confused ramblings of lov in a beautiful way....
thnx ppl!!!!!!!!!!!
dats amazin..u got a unique quality to display ur emotions impeccably thru ur wrds.....
keep up da gud wrk...- jojo
p.s ur heart seems confused...."all" da tym..!!! ;) u kno wat i mean...
read quarter life crisis..dilemmas are true so dont doubt them..they are genuine..everyone is facing them...just keep moving..and learn from them..still keeping heart open..and dont worry abt getting hurt..if love is true pain is true as well..and they complement each other..bound to occur!!..
baaki one solution I figured out..Love is all abt giving ..placing expectations of a reciprocated love diminishes ur own love..
second..expectaions cause suffering...no matter what ..if the person doesn't respond or doesn't respond the same way it pains..so best way I found is NO EXPECTATIONS..despite this if I wanna do something for somebody ..good enough..but don't expect if I'll need he/she will be there..if he/she does..it's a bonus!!!
See there is nothing to loose..
NEVER FALL IN LOVE...ALWAYS RISE IN LOVE....
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